I'm glad the story is being received well and appreciated! I'm in the process of starting a new job in a new place atm so I'll be on a writing hiatus for the next month or so, but I plan to get back to it and produce chp 3 at some point.
I intended these posts as sort of test runs for this story, so I might change aspects of the plot and characters later on to fit with where I decide to take it. I'm especially curious what you guys thinj worked/didn't work, where you'd like to see the story go, and generally any suggestions or constructive criticisms you have about what I've written. I'm particularly interested in if you think the seduction scene in chp 1 was too rushed, if that should be extended with more innocent banter or casual flirtation. Re-reading it myself, Hannah does kind of give in pretty quickly without too much buildup.
Thanks everyone for the positive comments! I can't believe I wrote something like this and that people read it...you guys are fucking weird, but then so am I...