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« on: October 22, 2021, 05:43:07 AM »
Wow, this was really great. Honestly, chapter 3 was my favorite so far. My only small gripe was that the mom was converted slightly too fast, but honestly that can easily be fixed by having a time period of her completely regretting what she said and horrified with herself that she ever thought that. She can then be overly friendly with her son in her misguided attempt at redeeming herself (this makes the son also think that his mom just made a mistake and their relationship is better than ever) only to be completely corrupted again and falling much harder and in turn her son is that much more devastated.