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Fantasy Discussion / Re: Mom getting fucked upstairs while family members are downstairs
« on: May 25, 2021, 12:53:11 AM »
It's not exactly what you may be looking for. But I am writing an oblivious son based story.
https://breakmysoul.bdsmlr.com/(You may need to create an account to read all the posts)

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Fapping Materials / Re: Stories where the son is dumb and oblivious
« on: May 16, 2021, 07:22:10 PM »
https://breakmysoul.bdsmlr.com/
You may need an account to read the chapters.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Feedback for story
« on: January 29, 2021, 08:52:23 PM »
That's one issue with bdsmlr, I didn't find any way to change the order of the posts. You can create an account on bdsmlr and then scroll to the bottom and then read it. It's really inconvenient but I don't know any other way around it.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Feedback for story
« on: January 27, 2021, 03:50:20 AM »
Well, I do agree with the initial setting of mother playing it off may be not as realistic, maybe I could have done better. But I kind of disagree with the opinion that the images kind of throw the story off. My goal sort of is to setup the story/scenes and then focus on the sex scenes, and I think the pics/gifs add to it. I have read the literotica stories with detailed descriptions of the sexual scenes but I kind of find it ...okish. But then again, different people will have different opinions and likes, but again appreciate the feedback. I'll try to add more textual content for the sex scenes and see if that complements the visual/sound aids.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Feedback for story
« on: January 13, 2021, 12:19:18 AM »
Yeah, I need to improve the grammar or writing a little bit. English is not my first language, so apologize for that. Yeah , I think you are right, maybe I can make the bullies more assertive, explanation is not always needed for everything. I'll try to incorporate that in the next chapters.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Feedback for story
« on: January 10, 2021, 02:45:32 AM »
Yeah, I will add visuals. I have a theme for that, but need to do the proper set up which may take 1-2 chapters. After that it should be plenty of visuals.
Also I find the blog order irritating. I don;t know how to order the blogs properly.

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Fapping Materials / Feedback for story
« on: January 07, 2021, 06:13:34 AM »
Hey everyone, I am writing an erotic story series on https://bdsmlr.com/blog/breakmysoul which is a mom-son-bully based story. I am trying to write it with an inspiration from somethingf1234's Soccer mom and bully https://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/something1234/15184/Soccer-Mom-and-Bully.. Till now I have written 5 chapters.

Would appreciate if you could give it a read. You may need to create an account on bdsmlr to view more than 2-3 posts. I am open to suggestions as well to the types/themes of sex scenes/scenarios you would like. Please note, that this is my first time writing an erotic story and hence, I may suck at it. I would still appreciate your feedback.

Thanks

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Fapping Materials / Re: Clueless/Oblivious Son
« on: January 07, 2021, 06:08:45 AM »
Thanks !! I am trying to think of different scenarios and trying to keep the setting as realisitc as possible.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Clueless/Oblivious Son
« on: January 01, 2021, 06:48:24 PM »
I mean yes the more the realistic the better it is. But if we tried to stick to reality there would basically be no spicyness in the erotica. There has to be some level of, unrealistic interactions. For example, most of the mom-bully stories are based on the premise that mom has sex either in front of the son or is aware that the son is watching. Like to me that is unrealistic, but if you take that away, there is no way a writer can then depict the acts of sex itself which is the one of the core phases of most erotica.
Hence, I think there has to be some level of unreality, or in this thread's case obliviousness, to make the scenes, situations as hot and spicy as possible.

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Fapping Materials / Re: Clueless/Oblivious Son
« on: December 31, 2020, 11:50:04 PM »
Hey guys, so I just got free from my semester. And I thought what if I try to write a story myself based on this fantasy setting of oblivious son. Hence, I created a post on https://bdsmlr.com/blog/breakmysoul.
I am writing it slowly based on a chapter by chapter basis. A couple of reasons I wanted to do this:
1) In most of the stories the bully is quite aggressive and humiliating. Of course this are erotic stories but too much humiliation and it kind of becomes a turn-off, at least for me. Maybe not for others, but that's my perspective.
2) The mom openly has sex in front of son. As sexy and hot as it sounds, I think this makes it a little unrealistic. Of course, we are not here to deal with reality. But in my opinion a mom who has two sides, a loving mother side and a horny cheating side seems more interesting.
3) I wanted to use other mediums such as images, gifs and audio for a better story experience. And a text story just doesn't allow that. I agree that text stories leave a lot to our imagination, but I think with proper effort the story along with images, gifs and audio can be construed so that the reader is still in control of imagination while being guided by the writer.

Here is the link again: https://bdsmlr.com/blog/breakmysoul
Title is Oblivious Son
I would be happy if you have any feedback. Also you can suggest your fetish or let me know through message.

Thanks

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Fapping Materials / Clueless/Oblivious Son
« on: December 06, 2020, 09:35:05 PM »
I am trying to collect stories where the son is oblivious to his mom getting fucked by bully. Basically, lots of scenarios where mom looking sweaty and disheveled after meeting with bully, cum dripping through legs, mom getting fingered under covers, mom getting fucked in bedroom, but innocent son thinks it is the bully and mom doing random stuff. Maybe there are signs such as used condoms, cum drenched sheets/panties but the son brushes it aside thinking of it as anything else.

The closest I could find was this:https://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/something1234/15184/Soccer-Mom-and-Bully

Just the fact that the son is clueless makes it quite hot. It's ok if the son eventually finds out later or is shown by the bully later. But don't want the mom to show herself off to the son, for some reason that seems like a turn-off. Basically, the mom is cheating and trying to hide as much as possible.




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