Has anyone mentioned a defunct part of www.asstr.org created by someone named Polaris? It was long since deleted but lives on in the Internet Archive:
https://web.archive.org/web/20150828223524/http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Polaris/www/main.htm
The theme of the whole collection is sadistic females. There are gaps in the stories that were archived, regrettably. Here's one that's still around, with a mother who becomes sadistic, thanks to her already sadistic:
https://web.archive.org/web/20131121064634/http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Polaris/www/Girl_Scouts_DisHonor_Vanessa.htm
Warning: It's really extreme.
Yes, thank you for sharing that nemo. That was one of the most horrific stories I have ever read. Probably not the MOST extreme ever, but pretty damn close. It was very shocking, probably in my top 3 fucked up stories of all-time list. While reading extreme fiction is fine for a thrill, we must remember that these things happening in real life, or if we heard it on the news, we would feel absolutely gut wrenched. While the narrative progression was still unrealistic (let's face it, it's a very-very unrealistic scenario anyway; but let's assume we are in some warped future where certain people are ostracized by their family and the community; in this case 'Ugly and Timid' people?? Its universal enough) I still appreciated how the story's world and characters slowly turned against poor little Cathy throughout the narrative. The plot wasn't just 'wham bam thankyou maam'. The narrative had buildup and increased tension until the most disturbing demise you could ever imagine. Very creative stuff: it's been a long time since a story 'triggered' me so much. The author Taz knew how to twist the knife in so many cruel and clever ways with so many different characters used as pawns to destroy her feelings. Truly devious.
Thank you again.
While that story didn't specify a cruel mother in a specific mother-son netorare scenario it was truly a effective read.
I thought the original poster of this thread was after the first three chapters of this story...
Donald's Mother
https://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/story.php?storyid=8353The first three chapters are really where it's at. It's all written in the perspective of the bully. It's got poor prose, which ironically adds authenticity to the story, as this unintelligent but fierce bully is writing about his fantasies about how he takes over his victim's house and corrupts his victim's mother against her own son. I'm still not sure if it was written by a real-life teenage bully, some awkward dark teenager with dark fantasies, a findom delinquent cash-master who is getting paid by his slave 'Donald' to write about fucking 'Donald's Mom', with Donald instructing him what to write? It's a mystery how this story came to be.
Chapters 1 through 3 chronicle Donald's bullying and demise. Lots of homophobia and AIDS talk. After that the bully seems to write about his life with Donald's mother and his 'Lesbian???' girlfriend (go figure), as he sets up cat fights and watch girls punch each other up?
That where the 9-chapter story lost me, after chapter 3 when Donald is snuffed.
It's kind of hilarious, I could imagine the bully writer getting into this world and just says to real life 'Donald' online,
Master Rocco: "Sorry faggot, I'm writing you out of the story now, I'm going to kill you off in chapter 3, then I'm going to spend whatever remaining chapters I want to write having a party with your milf mom and my girlfriend, celebrating your death in your community.
Slave Donald: Do whatever ever you want master, I'll still pay your PayPal. Kill me off, I'll look foreward to reading what you write next.
I hope you enjoy the first three chapters of 'Donald's Mother' If you haven't read it already.
-Mathew Elizabeth
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